Dreaded Day

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    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

    Dreaded Day

    It was a brutal day,
    The skies were as if God knew and painted them grey.
    It was a quiet ride there, not a word spoken.
    But u see, this was their way out,
    as for me I was broken.
    They tore you from me while I lay asleep.
    I was deeply ashamed I couldn't even eat.
    I begged to the Lord..
    Help me Please, I cried.
    This pain is too great, i feel like I could die.
    He carried me through from then til Now.
    even though satan may taunt me, whisper lies in my head, 
    the Lord whispers to me as I lay in my bed.
    Your forgiven dear one..
    One day you will see..
    not only this baby, but what you truly mean to me.

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    stefy commented on Dreaded Day

    04-11-2010

    Very emotional and expressive.......................................................

    Oblaidon commented on Dreaded Day

    04-01-2010

    Good Friday is the day we recognize the day he gave his life for us so we could be forgiven. God has shown how much he loves us. Thank you for your testimony.

    ginga commented on Dreaded Day

    04-01-2010

    harmony, A poem that is unsettling for the subject has endured a painful and horrendous experience. By the end there is hope and god's intervention. I felt every emotion in this piece. ginga

    icu2 commented on Dreaded Day

    01-10-2010

    This is loaded with pathos...which makes it felt in a deeper way. Good job...don't stop writing.

    charles52 commented on Dreaded Day

    01-10-2010

    Harmony74: I like this poem. I can feel this poem. Very well- done. Thank you. Charles

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