Farewell Song

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A farewell letter to a person who changed my life and then left for new victories

Farewell Song

Don’t believe the kisses - they can mask a bite

Sometimes even an angel can turn to a kite

I blessed your way up but I didn’t bless your throne

Who cares for the cage when the bird has flown?


I am still the same captain standing on his deck

I am leading  the galley wishing it a wreck

But I’ll never leave your sailors on their own.

Who cares for the cage  when the bird has flown?


You told me “Time for flyer, it’s enough to creep”

But should I cut the roots that had grown so deep?

We were soaring in space facing the unknown.

Who cares for the cage when the bird has flown?


Should I tell “Don’t leave me”? No, let’s drop the words

Silent prayer of mine can beat many chords

You’re scratched on my heart but not etched in stone.

Thou giveth us light and I’ll burn to keep it on. 


14 July 2018


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08-10-2020

This was definitely enticing,i could feel the conviction from your metaphors.It;s a 10/10 for me keep up the good work.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Hayren’s Poems (19)

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