Finally, maybe...

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    Finally, maybe...

     Finally, maybe i'm starting to see
    This world isn't all cruel to me
    Possibly now i can look past
    The grief i was given-the love that didn't last

    Finally, maybe he wont make me cry
    Whenever that trauma evoking person passes by
    I think i may be able to smile
    Divert my attention for a long while

    Eventually all good things perish
    Ruminated despite how you cherish
    We the people just have to deal
    Finding new joy amid our illusion's hypnotic wheel

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    MalikPeterson commented on Finally, maybe...

    03-22-2010

    I like the journey you took. I am not sure where it started and It seems that you had to go through many deep dark woods to get to your final destination...but the good thing is that you made it and you have taught yourself how to smile and enjoy the moment. :)
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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