A Confused Heart

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i dont know what to think....

A Confused Heart

I'm obsessed with you
Not as scary as it seems
My love just can't be true
Even though you steal my dreams

Each and every night
As i glide smoothly into sleep
Thinking of you dosen't feel right
Since you're not mine to keep

The wry sun steals you away
Blinding me so i can't see
I call your name and stumble astray
But when i wake you're not next to me

It unravles this way everytime
But still i long for you
Perhaps love would give this reason and rhyme
So i pray my heart's yearnings are true.

By: Liz Prosser

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HarverTomsson commented on A Confused Heart

08-17-2011

Oh, those demon crushes! So all absorbing and demanding. Not at all like love. But enjoyable in a masochistic sort of way. I like this one. Maybe more than I should. . .

BrokenHeart2009 commented on A Confused Heart

08-16-2011

I like the word obsessed in this poem because when every thought turns to the would be love where is the freedom that one would give love if there is no freedom in your own mind from the thought of the love that can not be.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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