Silence

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    Okay admit it, you sometimes agree with this, i mean comfortable silence rocks but edgy wantiong to shrink away silence? the kind that makes a hot flsh spread over your neck? Yep that does suck.

    Silence

    A barrier thicker than any wall of stone,
    unpenetrable and unpredictable,
    as it fights as well as gaurds,

    No one sees the happenings,
    and no one hears the screams,
    for everything is silent,
    even when life blood starts to bleed,

    A weapon of great power,
    an atomic bomb shalln't triumph,
    for oddly srrow and unsureness shower,
    you want to shrink and melt away,


    Silence can kill

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    Lizziewriter27 commented on Silence

    01-18-2010

    this is her friend.... and i hope no one says any stupid commens or i will give u a peice of my mind! ily! hehe

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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