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Pretty sure we all have a friend like this...

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I know love
Somehow I do
I see it in their eyes
When they talk of you

So pretty and perfect
Who wouldn't be taken?
So charming and fun
My image is shaken

I can't stand by you
It just isn't liveable
'Cause when i'm there
I turn invisible

I'm the rock
You're the gem
I dont blame you
Or even them

The only one I resent
Is simply me
Because apparently, perfect,
I can't be.

By: Liz Prosser 

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Lizziewriter27’s Poems (59)

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Closing Night 2
Destiny? 0
First Part of Melody "Unseen" 1
At My Weakest 1
My Thoughts 0
A Writer Is There Own Worst Critic 1
Advice To A Child 0
A Painful Fate 0
Humanity 1
A Confused Heart 2
Greater Things 1
Happiness 1
Dont Leave Me 0
Not So Old Habits 0
In My Mind 0
Runner-up 0
Skinny 0
Justice 0
Depression Hurts 1
Painful Memories 0
Oregon's Lovely Gloom 0
Last Year 0
Missing 0
Invisible 1
Love 0
TUG OF WAR 0
Not Knowing 0
Fate 1
Pointless 1
Lost cause 1
In The Balance 1
Random 0
Unable 1
Finally, maybe... 1
Just People 1
SEVER 0
ASHES 1
For Me 0
Why? 0
EXPLAIN 2
No Me 1
Can you still 0
Let me be 0
Mirror To Nowhere 0
Perfect 0
WATCHING 0
Lost 0
HYPOCRITSY 0
Tension 0
Wonder 1
Release 0
Pain 0
Empty 1
Tehe 2
I love you 2
Texting 0
Writing 0
Silence 2
Crackling Energy 0