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  • tinamgoode
  • You have to get through the clouds to see the silver lining! Faith says I can move mountains! =)

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Our Loss is never a punishment. It is a Blessing!
All things through GOD!  Amen

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We lay in this womb
so small and warm
Growing m ore and more
as the days come
Mommy carries us with her
and protects us from harm
Knowing, that soon we will be laying in her arm
Daddy.. I can hear you talking out there
Don't lay your head on mommy's tummy
cuz' there is no room in here
Please move over sweet brother
and give me some space
cuz' whatever I'm lying on..
I know it shows on mom's face
I love you Mommy, and Daddy too
But I can only say this with a kick or two
There is one thing I really need you to know...
I don't feel so good, and my heartbeat is slow
My spirit is lifting, and it's time to go
I give what life I have left, to my twin brother
... Just so you know
I have given a piece of myself to everyone of you
This isn't a punishment.. It's my gift to you
Tiny fingers and little toes
Oh look, I have Daddy's nose
My face is thin, and my skin is fair
My mommy says, "I have her hair"
As I lay here with Mommy and Daddy looking at me
I wonder...
Do they see themselves in me
Gifts are given all the time
Do you know your gifts
Because I sure know mine
Some so small and simple to
But those biggest Gifts
are those parts of you

-Tina Goode
11/08/2002'


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WordSlinger commented on ~~~~~{{ GIFTS }}~~~~~

09-19-2009

I love how you gave the baby spirit a voice, this is poetry.:)

tinamgoode

09/20/2009

TY so much for reading! TY for your comment. I appreciate u all. Peace & Smiles

BraveMoon commented on ~~~~~{{ GIFTS }}~~~~~

08-08-2009

My youngest lost his twin sibling invitro, this is very sweet

tinamgoode

08/08/2009

So sorry to hear that. TY for reading. May God be with you always! Peace & Smiles My New Friend!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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My Lover, My Friend 0
My ShAdOw! 0
Nothing Said......... For Far To Long! 0
~~~~{{{{ "S@LV@TION" }}}}~~~~ 6
~~~ HIDDEN SUICIDE ~~~ 3
~*~**~*~**~*~ LOCKED UP ~*~**~*~**~*~ 0
Buried Deep 4
***Precious Baby Ian*** 0
In your garden 1
~~~~~{{ GIFTS }}~~~~~ 2
Sink Or Swim 0
~~{{{ FRIENDS }}}~~ 1
{{ ~~ The Fine Print Of Life ~~}} 2
Only The Beast Remains! 2
My Angel...... Dana 2
Love..... Laurie's Reward 3
~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~ 1