~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~

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    • tinamgoode
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    Dedicated to a point in my life that I never wish to return.  For those who can relate....    WE NVER HAVE TO RETURN!

    ~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~

     There is a place, deep inside my head
    That don't want me here, it wants me dead.
    The voices so loud,  so mean,  so cruel...
    I can't think anymore,  I just feel like a fool
    The voices they run 24 hours a day
    Please leave me alone and just let me lay
    I just want to lay here so quiet and still
    Just give me 5 minutes before we go back to hell
    Once agian you have surfaced and threatened my soul
    You'll do what you can to make sure I'm not whole
    Someday, I will show you the power I hold
    As I slowly pick you apart
    You will soon unfold
    You have my life so dingy and black
    I'll fight you forever cuz, " I want MY LIFE BACK"!

                                                                                         -Tina Goode
                                                                                             5/25/02

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    Tempestlady commented on ~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~

    08-07-2009

    Constant turmoil, running thoughts, survival of pain and loss. this is what i see, when I read what you show to me. Be strong, laugh long, get down on your knees. Never give in. It is a sin. You write from the heart, it tore me apart. Your words so up in your face. Satan, mind your place! Great write....
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    tinamgoode

    08/07/2009

    U ROCK! You have made my week! TY

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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