~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~

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    • tinamgoode
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    Dedicated to a point in my life that I never wish to return.  For those who can relate....    WE NVER HAVE TO RETURN!

    ~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~

     There is a place, deep inside my head
    That don't want me here, it wants me dead.
    The voices so loud,  so mean,  so cruel...
    I can't think anymore,  I just feel like a fool
    The voices they run 24 hours a day
    Please leave me alone and just let me lay
    I just want to lay here so quiet and still
    Just give me 5 minutes before we go back to hell
    Once agian you have surfaced and threatened my soul
    You'll do what you can to make sure I'm not whole
    Someday, I will show you the power I hold
    As I slowly pick you apart
    You will soon unfold
    You have my life so dingy and black
    I'll fight you forever cuz, " I want MY LIFE BACK"!

                                                                                         -Tina Goode
                                                                                             5/25/02

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    Tempestlady commented on ~~~~~ {{ VOICES }} ~~~~~

    08-07-2009

    Constant turmoil, running thoughts, survival of pain and loss. this is what i see, when I read what you show to me. Be strong, laugh long, get down on your knees. Never give in. It is a sin. You write from the heart, it tore me apart. Your words so up in your face. Satan, mind your place! Great write....
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    tinamgoode

    08/07/2009

    U ROCK! You have made my week! TY

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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