Buried Deep

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  • Feelings
    • tinamgoode
    • You have to get through the clouds to see the silver lining! Faith says I can move mountains! =)

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    Dedication: To all those who have left footprints
    in my heart.
    Peace & Smiles

    Buried Deep

    I have this secret no one knows
    It's locked up tight behind closed doors
    In the deepest part of my soul
    Lies the secret I so hold
    My thoughts and feelings, my emotions to
    Are all bundled up and wrapped tightly for you
    The answers you seek so deep inside
    Come closer now, look in my eyes
    What I have is yours to keep
    My Faith, My Love, you need not seek
    These gifts you hold deep in your heart
    Once you find them, we'll never part
    So now you see,
    This is why you are  part of me

    -Tina Goode
    09/2001'

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    Artie commented on Buried Deep

    11-27-2009

    Very nice piece - brings all kinds of feelings into my mind - 10 from me
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    tinamgoode

    11/28/2009

    You are a Blessing! Ty for reading and TY for your rating. Peace & Smiles... Tina

    Tempy commented on Buried Deep

    08-20-2009

    In the deepest part of my soul Lies the secret I so hold very nice indeed
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    tinamgoode

    08/20/2009

    TY you for your comment. It is appreciated! PEACE & SMILES

    Troubador commented on Buried Deep

    08-08-2009

    Excellent job Tina rhythm and rhyme scheme coincide and really gel, great poem though quite short.
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    tinamgoode

    08/08/2009

    TY 4 ur rating! Peace & Smiles

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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