A Goodnight Haiku

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    A first Haiku i wrote.

    A Goodnight Haiku

    I just close my eyes.

    Wishing  you here at my side.

    In this so  calm night.

     

    You may not be here,

    But as long as my heart  beats,

    Your presence I feel.




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    icu2 commented on A Goodnight Haiku

    10-20-2009

    This is very romantic and endearing........also very clever Haiku!

    jammaekas

    10/21/2009

    Thanks Ani:) I only made it a try....

    Lolee commented on A Goodnight Haiku

    10-05-2009

    This is so beautiful! You have taught me something. I am going to try to make a poem all out of Haiku's. You did a lovely job on this.

    jammaekas

    10/21/2009

    Thanks Lolee:) I already read a Haiku that you wrote, that's an excellent try...!!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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