THUNDERBOLT

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    A poem to remind us that we are one with nature.

    THUNDERBOLT

    In the abyss of my thought,

    I saw a thunderbolt.

    It draws a crooked line in the firmament,

    And sounds like a deafening agape.

     

    When your whip strikes,

    A sturdy tree will die.

    Every time you rumble,

    My eardrum will fall.

     

    When nature’s in rage,

    Everything will be sweep.

    If mankind don’t take hold of it,

    Everything will perish.


    ***09302009*** 

     

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    icu2 commented on THUNDERBOLT

    12-03-2009

    This is really good jammaekas! Good food for thought! Keep up the good work!
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    knight4696 commented on THUNDERBOLT

    10-24-2009

    Another Great Job Jammaekas! A very visually descriptive piece. Keep it up and you'll have the poetic community Thunderstruck!! :) Ken
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    jammaekas

    10/24/2009

    :))))Thunderstruck!!quite a word.. i often right poems with clear visual descriptions...next time i'll try to write a poem which will keep the readers thinking..

    nhorlandi commented on THUNDERBOLT

    09-29-2009

    this one is excellent, nicely written, nice choice of words, very smooth...only that it's a thunderbolt it rattles you when it strikes. I enjoyed the read. 10+
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    jammaekas

    09/29/2009

    thank u sir:) Yeah right i really fear thunderbolt that's why i wrote about it to overcome my fear:)))

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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