FOR YOU

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    FOR YOU

    Seeing you is the best thing I know,
    A feeling in my heart just grow.
    For all the lads I know,
    For You an incredible feeling just glow.

    In my fury,
    You accept it truly
    An evidence of your sincerity
    That makes me feel happy.

    At your side I’m secure
    Of all kinds of trouble
    That makes me feel comfortable.
    Hope you won’t ignore.

    Your voice Is so gentle,
    Entices a lass like me.
    Your eyes that glare,
    Gives me a steady gesture.

    For you I crave,
    ‘til my grave.
    In my heart I treasure,
    Hope I’m really sure.

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    knight4696 commented on FOR YOU

    10-24-2009

    A beautiiful poem of thelonging desire you possess for the one you truly love. A very nice job!

    jammaekas

    10/24/2009

    If only my lovelife is as beautiful as my poem:))))...

    scrye commented on FOR YOU

    09-09-2009

    Nice poem and placed to form a nice image of want. Written very nice. I liked this one also, good job. Keep posting i will gladly read

    Lolee commented on FOR YOU

    08-05-2009

    In true love, hope springs eternal! And so it has gone since the beginning of time. nice.

    jammaekas

    08/05/2009

    Thanks again:) I wrote this accdg. to the request of my friend for their anniversary..

    nhorlandi commented on FOR YOU

    04-15-2009

    you have perfectly in the first and last paras. The rest of the lines were good enough at least the flow was smooth and easy. Well done...10+

    jammaekas

    08/05/2009

    I think its easy to write if it came from the heart...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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