Have You Ever......

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    • forbiddenlove
    • No matter how hard I try to let him go, his grasp on my heart is too tight!

    Have You Ever......

     Have you ever looked in someone's eyes & knew for certain if you were to fall that they would catch you?
    Have you ever looked in someone's heart & knew without doubt they'd be there for the good & bad to see you through?
    Have you ever touched someone's hand and at that moment you were made aware they'd handle your heart with care?
    Have you ever kissed someone's lips and you were sure it was their heart, with you, they wanted to share?
    Have you ever listened to someone's words and you were confident that for you they'd give it all?
    Have you ever seen someone look at you and you were definite, even with your flaws, they'd stand by your side, proud & tall?
    If you'd look at me in all these ways then you'd see yourself in such beautiful ways!!!
    You'd see I'd catch you & never let you fall, I'd see you through it all, I'd handle you with care, with you my heart I'd share, I'd give you all and stand by you proud & tall...most of all I'd love you always!!!

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    Solaris commented on Have You Ever......

    05-08-2013

    Time to spell the word "and" otherwise the poem is good
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    forbiddenlove

    05/08/2013

    Thank you. I agree, I usually try to omit the "&" or any shortcut. I must have done it out of habit, cause I do it in everyday writing of general things. Again thank you

    Solaris commented on Have You Ever......

    05-08-2013

    Its cute. I like it the only criticism I really have for it is the use of the & sign it kinda shows a little dissasosiativeness from the poem like you don't have the emotion so you don't care to taket
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    SuziJean commented on Have You Ever......

    05-06-2013

    Such trust to put in one person, i wish i had that kind of trust left inside of me. This knocked some sense of feeling back into me. Thanks for sharing your voice.
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    forbiddenlove

    05/08/2013

    Thanks so much. The reason I write is in hopes someone can relate or benefit from my reading. I am no pro to say the least, I just pour my heart into it, what you read is truly what I feel deep inside:)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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