HIGHER MATH

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    A new relationship was just beginning. Fallling in love? Maybe. But I wasn't keeping track.

    HIGHER MATH

    17 times.
    I remember each touch
    of your hand on my arm.
    No big deal. Not much.

    11 x 3.
    You gave me a hug.
    Yeah, they felt really good
    but I remained smug.

    A kiss. Maybe twice.
    Or was it 4? Or 10?
    I'll have to start adding
    all over again.

    I'm not good at math
    so my count's not exact.
    But don't get the idea
    that I'm keeping track.

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    Whiskers commented on HIGHER MATH

    02-25-2011

    This was humorously clever, a very interesting write. Not to subtract from any addition, I am divided on the subject of these calculated emotions. ;-) Whiskers

    ClearlySays commented on HIGHER MATH

    01-30-2011

    Haha loved this! very witty and sweet dedication to hidden feelings.

    sherlock139

    01/31/2011

    Thank you for your comment.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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