M.I.A.

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    M.I.A.

     Missing in action. But only a fraction. Not all of the heart. Just a very big part. Send out the Mounties. Search all of the counties. Might use a flashlight. Search through the dark night. Don't think you'll find it. Just left it behind it wasn't no good anymore. Dropped it outside of the store. Maybe it needs repairs. Or someone who cares. Because that ain't me, you can have it for free.

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on M.I.A.

    03-18-2011

    I like this poem; it has rythm. I like the use of metaphores and simplicity. You have a point and you made it, no dancing around.
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    sherlock139

    03/18/2011

    Thank you, BrokenHeart2009. I appreciate your comments.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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