I Can Wait

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  • wargirl23
  • Is anxiously awaiting the day she can announce the release of her first book.

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Written June 14th, 2012

I Can Wait

1 There are three words I know
I should tell you.
There is a line,
That you should hear.
5 But one things for sure,
I fear those words
'Cause your answer is a mystery.
Three simple words
Should not cause fear,
10 One little line,
Should not change what we feel.
But sometimes it does,
And I want to be sure
That they won't mess with our heads.
15 So I'll wait to tell you 
I love you.
I'll wait to whisper them in your ear.
Because I know those words are true;
I can wait,
20 To speak them to you.

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Qualin commented on I Can Wait

10-21-2012

8 A LOT OF THOUGHT PUT INTO THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wargirl23

03/26/2014

Yeah I really thought about this one. I think I even rewrote it twice before I posted it haha

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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My Love will Last for a Lifetime 1
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