In a Moment

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  • wargirl23
  • Is anxiously awaiting the day she can announce the release of her first book.

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Finished copy July 31st, 2012

In a Moment

I see your face,
Smiling back at me.
I see your eyes,
Fill with joy.
My heart cries out,
Half longing half fear,
For this feeling is new to me,
And it's one I hold dear.
A moment before,
My heart was calm.
Now it races,
Pounding like a drum.
In a moment I realize,
How fast things change.
In a moment I realize, 
Things will never be the same.
When we're apart,
It's like an arrow through my heart.
When I am with you, 
The world seems to change.
No longer do I see,
Through my eyes alone;
But I now see with my heart,
And love overflows.

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Qualin commented on In a Moment

09-06-2012

Good timing and flow...keep it up!!! Good one!! Qualin

wargirl23

09/06/2012

Again, I say thank you. ^^ I was, inspired for this one, and, once I started it, I almost couldn't stop XD

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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