• wargirl23
  • Is anxiously awaiting the day she can announce the release of her first book.

Poem Commentary

Written March 8th, 2012

You

There are so many ways for me to thank You,
There is so much that You have done.
But how do I put these feelings to verse,
When I can't even find the right ones?
You made the world,
Every grain of the sand.
You made the air,
Every breath that we breathe.
You made the sea,
Every crest of the wave.
You made our lives,
And every second we live.
You gave us life,
And we repaid You with sin.
You gave us choice,
And we chose to give in.
You gave us love,
And we responded with hate.
You gave Your son,
And we cast Him away.
No matter where we turn,
No matter where we go, 
No matter what the lie,
No matter what the road,
No matter what the time,
No matter where the place,
You are always there,
And You will always care.
We don't deserve,
The chances You give.
We don't deserve,
The time that You spend.
We don't deserve,
The love that You have.
We don't deserve,
The plans that You made.
Everything You've done,
Everything that You do,
Everything You love,
Just continues to prove,
You made us all,
Every word that we use.

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lisaner commented on You

08-01-2012

Lovely writing. Some of the best poems ever written, the best music ever made, has been for the glory of The Almighty One. God gives us these gifts and somehow the words, the notes come.

wargirl23

08/01/2012

Yes :) through God all things are possible. I love sharing this joy I find in Him with the world. Thank you for liking my poem :)

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

wargirl23’s Poems (18)

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Love Lost 1
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Lead On 1
Can You Hear? 1
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My Love will Last for a Lifetime 1
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Stars in the Bright Sky 0
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