I Can't Believe Its You

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    • shanny8917
    • My own two favorite poems are "Train of Defeat" and "The Story of Sorrow"

    I Can't Believe Its You

     Tense at first
    but anticipating the best.
    Almost immediate,
    you put my mind to rest.
    A weekend spent
    in each other's arms
    put aside
    all feeling of alarm.
    I had forgotten
    how wonderful love felt.
    You looked at me.
    The cards were dealt.
    I never imagined
    what we'd go through.
    I still can't believe
    its really you.

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    BringMeBullets commented on I Can't Believe Its You

    03-26-2010

    Aww... An upbeat, personal write. I loved it! Very well written, and short, sweet, and to the point. Very cute! Great write. A ten from me.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    shanny8917’s Poems (19)

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    I Can't Believe Its You 1 02/08/2010
    Who Am I? 2 01/31/2010
    You Ruined Me 2 01/27/2010
    The Devil Can Kiss My Ass 3 01/09/2010
    Coming To Terms 4 07/16/2009
    The Train of Defeat 4 07/03/2009
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    Freedom 1 07/03/2009
    Actor 2 07/03/2009
    My Heart 4 07/03/2009
    Senses 0 07/03/2009
    Comfort 1 07/03/2009
    Sorrow (The Story Of) 2 07/03/2009
    Past Future 1 07/03/2009
    I'm Not Laughing 1 07/03/2009
    We'll Never Know 1 06/12/2009
    Home 3 02/20/2009
    You Were The One 1 02/20/2009
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