You Were The One

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  • Lost Love
    • shanny8917
    • My own two favorite poems are "Train of Defeat" and "The Story of Sorrow"

    You Were The One
    I gave up on love a long time ago.
    It hurt so much when it started to grow.
    You came along and stole my heart.
    You gave my life a whole new start.
    Reluctantly I gave my heart to you.
    I thought that what you said was true.
    When you said we would never part,
    I relented and let go of my heart.
    You were the one to help me see
    that love can be what it's meant to be.
    You were the one to pave the way.
    You made me realize that love remains.
    You were the one.
    Oh, you were the one.
    So why now are you gone?

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    omseattle commented on You Were The One

    02-20-2009

    Staying apart from love one's is very painful,
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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