I just write

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  • Memories
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  • Regret
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  • Dark Poetry
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  • Loss

    I just write

     I turned to see my shadow,
    And everything turned black.
    I'm so tired of feeling hollow,
    But wont turn back.
    Another day is coming,
    I have to remain strong.
    But still my focus is,
    On what I've done wrong.
    So I hide inside,
    These word, this rhyme.
    Tyring to find something,
    That's worth my time.
    I can't escape history.
    Or these flashing memories.
    So I just write.
    Using them as insight.

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    Tempestlady commented on I just write

    02-07-2011

    Well i like the rhythm, and dig your rhyme, your mesage however i would like to see next time be that which turned everything to black, and made you feel hollow? That's what i would like to read about. This was nice though. Writeon..........Tlady
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    markah79

    02/17/2011

    My poem Life, Moving On might give you a little better idea of what turned everything black. Not one of my better poems, but it might help you understand this one.

    poeticmike commented on I just write

    02-04-2011

    So descriptive & deep. Awesome piece. I can deeply relate to you we are the same bigtime, sometimes thru all youve been thru theirs one area u can turn to & thats.......the poetic corner of relief....-Mike
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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