I'm watching raw emotions

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    I'm watching raw emotions

    I'm watching raw emotions
    Even though it maybe fake
    I can stillfeel my heart as it tries not to break
    I wish you would understand but I don't think you will
    I'll conceal it inside and pretend as if nothing is new
    I love you so much but how much longer can I keep up lieing

    I'm so sick of this shit
    I'm sick of our love dying
    If ony you could feel the same way I feel about you
    We could save what love is left and have a redo
    But you haven't made any effort and therefore neither will I
    I won't be madea fool
    And I wn't cry
    A smart man once said
    No man s worth your tears
    and the one who is won't make you cry

    And I know that man was right
    And someday I'll find out why

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    papapaczki commented on I'm watching raw emotions

    12-16-2010

    "Breaking up is hard to do" comes to mind. Bummer it doesn't sound like it working out. Maybe for the best..
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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