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    hanging limp
    from a branch
    the leaves sway
    in the breeze
    Orange ones
    Red ones
    all tumble
    doen with ease
    winter is coming
    the air is
    getting cold
    as the seasons change
    her age really shows
    her skin is now crinkled
    like a dried leaf
    her body so frail
    its so hard for her to breathe
    and just like the seasons
    her life has come and past
    how much longer
    will fall last

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    magickmutt commented on untitled

    05-10-2010

    damn babe... breathe taking... not trying to hyperbole it but... the structure fits... the rhythm is just right... and the imagery is vivid... write more like that... :) love ya
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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