Killing Blow

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    Killing Blow

    The shower is heard running
    along with giggles through the door
    a double set of clothing
    is found lying on the floor
    as he kisses down her neck
    neither thinking about scrubbing
    a soft spurt of an "I love you"
    She hears and keeps on rubbing
    He stops her, turnign off the steam
    and silence fills the air
    the curtain slides away
    and exits a happy pair
    sliding off her towel
    he kisses her tenderly
    and runs his fingers through her damp hair
    laying down with her gently
    he repeats that he loves her again and again
    thrusting with great ease
    as their bodies move in perfect sync
    and she gives his hand a squeeze
    she longs for just one night
    but knows they've just got now
    'Cause they'll go back to their stressful lives
    they had avoided some how
    They'll both replay those moments
    remebering the love, the heat
    and in hopes to renew it
    maybe in a month they'll meet
    but no matter where they go
    theythink not but of eachother
    and the feeling each gets
    when their one under the covers
    his wifedoesn't know about her at all
    and her boyfriends just a filler
    such a shame to witness this
    when love becomes the killer
    just goes to show that even when
    two people may seem perfect
    if we could just read eachothers minds
    we'd find we're less observant
    those we think are doing fine
    living strong and stable
    are really fighting through it all
    and walking the thin cable

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    Artie commented on Killing Blow

    09-11-2010

    This is a really interesting write. A look from the outside, and within as well - 10 from me

    lucindaclaire commented on Killing Blow

    11-24-2009

    Thank you for this poem. You understand so much about love, the lack of it, and what it means to give yourself to the wrong person while withholding love from the right one.

    tsmith

    11/24/2009

    thanks

    lonewolf commented on Killing Blow

    04-09-2009

    another good one. you do good work, keep it up

    cottonluv commented on Killing Blow

    03-13-2009

    this is good work i like the meaning of this poem.it happens so much everyday.keep up the good work

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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