Reassurance

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    Reassurance

    You feel the rain pouring down
    as it soaks through your white dress
    you feel the way the fabric hugs
    your delicate curves and breasts
    he looks at you through the rain
    his damp hair in his face
    and in what seems like no time at all
    his arms curl 'round your waist
    he kisses you ever so gently
    and sparks fly through the air
    the feeling set you on fire
    as your fingers knot his hair
    it builds to this ecstacy
    whenever he's around
    and nothing in the whole wide world
    could ever bring you down
    his body pressed tight against yours
    for a moment it all feigns
    and then as he pulls away
    your breathing you regain
    you look into his eyes again
    they sparkle back with love
    and now your reassured
    there are heavens above

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    Artie commented on Reassurance

    09-11-2010

    Wow I really like this. You bring us inside the moment and allow us to feel it. 10 from me

    reCHrEfleca commented on Reassurance

    04-10-2009

    lovely!!!! can imagine the scene in your poem.

    lonewolf commented on Reassurance

    04-09-2009

    great job smitty! i really enjoyed this. you have some real talent

    OUTSPOKEN commented on Reassurance

    03-20-2009

    Excellent tsmith,simply excellent!!

    saint010 commented on Reassurance

    03-20-2009

    glorious

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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