In Pain.
With every ragged breath,
A new vertebrae is ruptured.
Everything that held strength,
Is losing its structure.
My insides acidic and rancid,
My throat burning,
Making me lucid.
Others discerning.
–The feeling of PAIN.
In Pain.
1 Comments
Tags: Pain
- WishfulPoet94
- I did not win the contest. But I am still in high hopes and entering a review board. :) Wish me luck!
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12-23-2009
- This was a good one. My only wish is that you privileged us with a longer work.
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12/27/2009
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