is he just a man

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    love

    is he just a man

    is he just a man
    one thing he learned since he was young be the king on your jungle
    keep your head up and stay humble
    and treat you lady like a queen
    and forget the other lions grumble
    but his heart is blind

    is he just a man
    every since he was younger he had this special person
    she was always there for him when the pain was gone or if it worsened
    he loved her but was scared to show it
    he didnt know how to love her because of his life of torrent
    but his heart is blind

    is he just a man
    they loved eachother when they were alone it was plain to see
    when their alone she will always see his sweet side guarenteed
     he hid his smile with a scowl like a lion
    when the smile was there they stared into eachothers eyes heavenly
    but his heart is blind

    is he just a mann
    times were hard in his life so he started working illegal
    all she did was pray and go to any place with a steeple
    crime happened as he was getting arrested he gave her a letter
    he wrote it earlier about his love for her and he would choose her over all people
    but his heart is blind

    is he just a man
    he found another girl who was here for the moment
    didnt think the one he loved had known it
    he also forgot about all the trouble he took his lover threw
    he made a commitment to her to show her a love like he had shown it
    but his heart is blind

    is he just a man
    hes more then that he knows hes her man
    he has repeated cheating on her again and again
    now hes older and wiser and hes going to love her like she deserves 
    she hugged him and told him your lucky i love you and held his hand
    thanks to her his heart can see that he has a great woman

        - gods son 

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    AmadeusEx commented on is he just a man

    06-27-2009

    you have a great talent, just check your spelling, and break it up more so the reader has more pauses, otherwise, i enjoyed it, you painted a picture of a man who thinks he is a man and he cheats and expects somebody else to be better but she isnt.....though i think at the end he got lucky, most women arent as forgiving

    quise

    06/27/2009

    yeah i did get lucky lol

    sammia commented on is he just a man

    06-27-2009

    very good...great job, write and read. I like it...

    SaintStoney commented on is he just a man

    06-27-2009

    I enjoyed this, And alot of that is very true. Great job!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    quise’s Poems (32)

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    what a heart would say 0
    my silent cry 0
    love or illusion 0
    The question 1
    LOVE IS TRUE 0
    REST IN SLEEP 0
    wheres my hoodie 0
    new smile 0
    living dead 1
    black rose 2
    glass flowers 1
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    is he just a man 3
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    i still love you 0
    the reson i cant love 3
    spontanious (short) 0
    blessed (short) 0
    eternity (short) 0
    confusion (short) 0
    take it slow (short) 0
    blessing or lesson 0
    where did she go 0
    i will 0
    my hearts cry 1
    cause she loved him 2
    my final goodbye 2
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