too late to give up

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    • quise
    • Now keep in mind that im an artist and im sensitive about my shit -eryka badu

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    words from the heart

    too late to give up

    stay strong,never give up,love dont hurt were rules i grew up to know hold her hand,look her right in her eyes when you speak to her the eyes are the window to the heart
    i can still hear my father saying when you find your queen treat her as
    a king is supposed to,
    never thaught love was true fairy tales only come on disney i would tell my father
    then my heart grew
    that is when i met her she taught me how to love
    when i looked in her eyes all i could see was love,joy,and happiness she made me know that mistakes are mistakes and forgivness heals all mistakes
    but remember forgivness is what it takes
    she taught me how to love better then my father had even way back then
    i taught her how to kiss and how to feel special again
    she took me from lacking a heart to loving oh so hard
    she loved me when i was at my highest peak and loved me harder when i was on a downfall
     her eyes  still are the only thing that makes me smile
    we jumped head first into love and got up in more love 
    i can still feel her soft hands and still smell the fragrance she use to wear
    i can swear when im driving i see her pass me but must be the review mirror messing with me
    they say things happen for a reson and she tells me that fate is something that will be
    she left my life after a short year everyone still asks me about her
     i dont know what to tell them is she safe,ok,is she atleast thinking of me
    reunited atlast
     im glad shes close i tell her then back to arguing
    this isnt the love my dad told me about
    i didnt know that love came with hate as its step child
    but im willing to deal with it
    i finally feel i gave up shes out of my mind forever
    we've both found someone else i just cant let her go during that relationship
    i seen it was the same for her too so now were both back single
     but im sticking to my mind of giving up but were still friends atleast
    as were talking she tells me her heart has something to say
     Don't ever give up if you still want to try,
    don't ever wipe your tears if you still want to cry.
    Don't ever settle for an answer if you still want to know.
    Don't ever say you don't love her if you can't let her go
                                
    -gods son

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    hdmac commented on too late to give up

    07-27-2009

    Too long, yet good read. I could'nt finish all of it.

    AmadeusEx commented on too late to give up

    07-01-2009

    amazing read, i cant imagine how you know what you know at such a young age, the rhymes you pull out and throw its like youre not supposed to know that youre too young;...amazing stuff man, ten from me

    WinterFrost commented on too late to give up

    06-30-2009

    Love eternal True love rich with emotion quise and leaves me with a deeper understanding of devotion. Excellent work

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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