spontanious (short)

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    • Now keep in mind that im an artist and im sensitive about my shit -eryka badu

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    spontanious (short)

    lets move to a place far away she says
    i wonder if shes serious or just a test
    somewhere far like india or austrailia
    i really dont want to go but im afraid if i dont i failed ya
    are you scared she asks lets pack our bags we will go tonight
    battling my heart over my mind thats a hell of a fight
    we will have fun experience new things
    but their indian people in america my heart is starting to scream
    we should go over there and live for the adventure
    but adventure leades to danger my mine remembers
    lets go next month what do you say
    i say im scared but i would die without you here with me i wouldnt last a day
    -gods son

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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