Jeopardy

0 Comments

Tags:
  • Life

    Poem Commentary

    A new love..... Don't stop trying if the old one failed you....

    Jeopardy

     
      My heart is in jeopardy ....
    And it don't seem to matter to you.....
    Should I hold on to the old....
     Scared of the new.....

     I am strong.....
    But weak when it comes to loving...
     Someone......
    The old is not out for that kinda attention...

     These words are my concerns....
    I don't need a love that burns....
    Will you ever be all in....

     All in means you respond....
    In some fare time....
    I am shinnier then all of those dimes...
     You are chasing......

     Are you going to keep holding back....
    Just tell me I'll bail out....

     By..........
                                Redbloodink.......
     

    Poem Comments

    (0)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    toredbloodink’s Poems (71)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Nothing Less 1
    A Babies Shower 0
    A Dream for You 0
    Trying to touch people with the word ofGod 0
    God Today 0
    The Room We Read 0
    YOU & ME 0
    IN HEAVEN 0
    Believe and See 0
    one more mile..... 0
    being here 1
    the things I think about 0
    universe 0
    the writers box 0
    Do I Write Too Impatiently 0
    Why Do I Write 0
    If It Was Up To Me 1
    The Endless Sea Of Nothingness 0
    So What Do You See? 0
    THE PLACE TO BE! 0
    TODAY 0
    The You I Needed.... 0
    The World I Create 0
    sands of us 0
    What a Write 1
    A Letter of indecisions 1
    back and forth 0
    heart less...... 0
    Hot & Cold 0
    Something New......... 0
    The Abyss of Half Ass Love 0
    detsiwt 0
    never talk 0
    the words you want to hear 0
    around you 0
    the inner 0
    how can i 1
    my thoughts 0
    everyday. is. magical. knowing you 0
    physical intimacy 0
    the used 0
    how does it work 0
    my happy spot 0
    the sting of pain 0
    I pick myself up..... 0
    hiding my feelings 0
    let me get to know you 0
    will I let go 0
    Do You Want To Know..... 0
    Jeopardy 0
    something else...... 0
    silly of me!!!! 0
    wet 0
    not you...... 0
    snuggle.... 0
    snuggle.... 0
    words 0
    First & Last 0
    Love Here..... Hate Plays 0
    maybe leave me alone..... 0
    Deep Love 0
    Not Real 0
    The Amazing Love 0
    How Stupid 0
    Not A New Love 0
    Testamony 0
    GOD 0
    The Enemy of the Dark 0
    My Belief 0
    TO MY GOVERNMENT 0
    the ............R
    EDBLOODINK...
    ........ origina
    0