The You I Needed....

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    Lead on... But not used.... Hurt but not unloving... I care about her... But just will never be able to want a relationship with her ever again.... Just remember I tried and I only try once .....

    The You I Needed....

      
              The you I needed.......
                   Wasn't the you at all....
                      I needed the one......
                         That would catch me as I fall...

           As you fell I cought you....
                 As we grew as two people..    Things stayed the same, nothing new...
                     

              I poured more love in.....
                  Thinking how could I stop...
                     Your heart I never could win....
                        I didn't have the bumper crop....

         The money and things.....                            That always shine.......
    Diamond rings.....
                  But I'll be fine........


                       I won't be your next fix.....
                          I refuse to be your toy......
                            As I live my life out......
           I am the man, while you chase boys....

              What they can't see they are in line...
                 Call you text you....
    When you don't do the same.....
                      I am to blame.....

     Not of wronging you, but you of me...
            I want something real......
              I just wanted to refuse to see...
      You're just a girl my heart you can't steal...

             What do you think of this.....
                You won't, nor do you....
                  We shared a kiss....
                    None of your words true...


            Your the half ass love....
                And I throw the thought into...
                             The abyss......
         
                    Revised the abyss of half ass love 
     


     Redbloodink... 

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