So What Do You See?

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What can I say the picture I originally saw faded away.... What did you see?

So What Do You See?

   
     So what is it that I see....
I see hope in this world.....
           As I paint this picture....
                What do you see? 

       Pictures of words.....
Pictures unread.....
Pictures.....
That I see in my head......

           Rolling hills of landscape.....
     Towering green trees.....         Billowing clouds of grey and white  ....
         Baby birds and hungry pleas...

              What is it that you see...
         Love, words and life....
                   A picture of what can it be...
           

  Can you imagine a picture.....?
       Can you see it clear.....?
          What can it be......?
              Share it with the world and me..!



 Redbloodink...


             
             
 

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

toredbloodink’s Poems (71)

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Nothing Less 1
A Babies Shower 0
A Dream for You 0
Trying to touch people with the word ofGod 0
God Today 0
The Room We Read 0
YOU & ME 0
IN HEAVEN 0
Believe and See 0
one more mile..... 0
being here 1
the things I think about 0
universe 0
the writers box 0
Do I Write Too Impatiently 0
Why Do I Write 0
If It Was Up To Me 1
The Endless Sea Of Nothingness 0
So What Do You See? 0
THE PLACE TO BE! 0
TODAY 0
The You I Needed.... 0
The World I Create 0
sands of us 0
What a Write 1
A Letter of indecisions 1
back and forth 0
heart less...... 0
Hot & Cold 0
Something New......... 0
The Abyss of Half Ass Love 0
detsiwt 0
never talk 0
the words you want to hear 0
around you 0
the inner 0
how can i 1
my thoughts 0
everyday. is. magical. knowing you 0
physical intimacy 0
the used 0
how does it work 0
my happy spot 0
the sting of pain 0
I pick myself up..... 0
hiding my feelings 0
let me get to know you 0
will I let go 0
Do You Want To Know..... 0
Jeopardy 0
something else...... 0
silly of me!!!! 0
wet 0
not you...... 0
snuggle.... 0
snuggle.... 0
words 0
First & Last 0
Love Here..... Hate Plays 0
maybe leave me alone..... 0
Deep Love 0
Not Real 0
The Amazing Love 0
How Stupid 0
Not A New Love 0
Testamony 0
GOD 0
The Enemy of the Dark 0
My Belief 0
TO MY GOVERNMENT 0
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