What a Write

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    I though of You Jesus Christ.....

    What a Write

      
       What a write.....
    Did you steal it.....
    Was it in a picture.....
    Within your eye sight.....

         
                                Did it just come to you?
                      Like a dream in your sleep!
               Out of the blue........
            Some ones memory did you keep?


                                        Did it just appear....?
                           On this blank page.....!
                     Was the message clear.....?
                Or raw emotion did it rage.....?


                                  Why all the dots at the end?
                            Of all you write.....!
                                            Why did you send.....?
                                 Me a warm good night!


               Why care at all you ask.....?
         Why do the things I do.....!
        It's all work, a task.....
    What's it to you?


                                 Can you see me at all?
                       Can you hear me,  reading my words.....
                                        Will you write me a response?
                                Wow what a write!!!!!


                 Will you see what I saw....?
                                Will you ever hear, what I heard......
                            Will it ever be raw....
                 Love one another is the word......


                                   Yes I wrote this for me.....
                 Yes I wrote this for you.......
    Yes I wrote this.........
    No I have everything too do........ 
                        

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    moontigerntn commented on What a Write

    11-22-2016

    "Wow what a write!!!!!"...creative and interesting.
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    toredbloodink

    11/22/2016

    I just read this tonight... I never know what I write until I read them later.... I have other pen names here my first name here ever was redbloodink...... Through all my struggles I come back here to read share write and just relax.... Don't ever believe I've encountered hate here..... Thanks for the comment... And taking time to read something I created out of thin air.... I love it I can go anywhere I want in my mind or world.......

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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