Something New.........

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    I can't stop loving you........

    Something New.........

         
      I asked God for something new.....
    I didn't see it then.......
    He made you....
    A perfect blend!

                      You seem to add into life...
    And then mine.....
    You are beautiful.....
    To me.......

                                 I really can't express....
                             With the words I paint.....
                           All the things you are.....
                         Keep shinning like a star.....

                               Keep me in suspence .......
                 You never sease to amaze me....
              Your physical presence ......
           But you are the total person....
         
                      I need you to be......
     

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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