Long Ago

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The relationship of the past.... so much sweeter than that of the present...

Long Ago

It seems so long ago
when we were carefree
Now it's only solemness
we always disagree.

It seems so long ago
when you could make me laugh
But now all of my smiles
have been cut in half.

It seems so long ago
when we giggled just for fun
But now no more of that
all of our good times are done.

It seems so long ago
when I loved you don't you see
Our relationship has nothing more
to offer you and me.

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Teardrops commented on Long Ago

07-31-2010

Best dear John i have ever read .saying goodby is never easy but you have done it with class and ease thanks for the read Marie

Rhymer commented on Long Ago

07-31-2010

Excellent but sad write ot two people who have drifted apart over time. 10 from me.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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