My Love

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    My Love
    my love knows no distance
    my love has no pride
    my love has no patience
    for how much I hide

    my love knows no secrets
    my love can not steer
    my love can not conquer
    all that i fear

    my love knows no compromise
    my love has no regret
    my love keeps on waiting
    I can't give up just yet

    my love knows no river
    my love can not swim
    my love wants to scream out
    all I hold within

    my love is not an anchor
    my love is not a risk
    my love should be treasured
    like an answer to a wish

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    digiruler01 commented on My Love

    06-04-2011

    Very good. This how I feel whenever I see my special one.
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    alwaysbroken16 commented on My Love

    06-08-2010

    "my love knows no river my love can not swim my love wants to scream out all I hold within" thats my favorite part...it just flows really well and i feel like i have felt the same things this poem is expressing...amazing poem :] read a few of mine if you get the chance? id love to know what you think
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    Brokeninside10 commented on My Love

    07-19-2009

    This poem is fantastic. It is a wonderful way to express just how you are feeling.
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    KLF commented on My Love

    06-06-2009

    Great rhythm and meter here. The flow is also good. I can sense some depth here and I like that. I almost feel you could have gone deeper to tell me about your love and its worth. I would love to hear you read this one.
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    caspiancri commented on My Love

    03-18-2009

    love is so interestin to read about every poem I read about is so different and yet the meaning is all the same nice work
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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