My War...

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    My War...

    There's a war in my head that keeps raging within

    I'm sure to most people my thoughts would be sins.

    My heart wants to thrive and love without a net,

    My head tells my heart…everything is a threat.

    My heart wants to live and laugh and play,

    My head tells my heart…no one will ever stay.

    My heart wants to be cherished and give all it's got,

    My head tells my heart…you'll never get that shot.

    My heart wants to feel like I'm a pretty girl,

    My head tells my heart…you'll never get that deal.

    My heart wants to flourish, live and bloom,

    My head tells my heart…there'll always be doom.

    My heart wants to grow and experience romance,

    My head tells my heart…you will never get that chance.

    All I ask is 1 chance in this life to be free,

    Free to be loved and free to be me.

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    MsBallard commented on My War...

    03-29-2009

    THIS POEM IS VERY UNIQUE AND IT REALLY HIT HOME I MUST ADMIT WHEN I READ IT I CRYED KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

    Qsangel

    05/31/2009

    thanks, sorry i made ya cry though.

    Journey commented on My War...

    01-13-2009

    This is really nice!!

    HoneyHued commented on My War...

    01-13-2009

    I love this, how vulnerable and wise.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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