the 'un' me

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    the 'un' me

    She’s just a fucking novelty…
    Because—she is…

    Unbeautiful
    Uncalm
    Unconfident
    Undesirable
    Undone
    Unexciting
    Ungraceful
    Unimportant
    Uninsensitive
    Uninvited
    Unlovely
    Unmean
    Unnumb
    Unpatient
    Unpretty
    Unrememberable
    Unsexy
    Unsmart
    Untalented


    But worst and most painful…
    Unlovable

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    strawb3rry14 commented on the 'un' me

    11-03-2009

    i cnt amagine why she feelz that way but itz written beautifully not unbeautifully lol

    Vincent commented on the 'un' me

    01-20-2009

    I will be the judge of that. SMILES Vincent

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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