without--i wrote this when i was 16


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    without--i wrote this when i was 16

    I lack something that everyone should have
    It is known in every place.
    This thing is called self confidence
    You can see it on my face.
    I need this thing so very much
    Like I'm sure that everyone does.
    If you ask me why I need it
    I simply say "because".
    I may not in a beauty contest
    Or anything at all.
    But if I had self confidence
    I wouldn't feel so small.

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    Marsink commented on without--i wrote this when i was 16


    You have enough to post your poems for a world of poets to see so, I have confidence in you that you must have overcome it to a great degree, or this exchange would not be possible. I like this from the heart of a young girl: very endearing. Thanks for making yourself vulnerable: in doing so, there is strength.

    Bladebearer commented on without--i wrote this when i was 16


    I feel that way too.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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