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    we met in mid-air
    the collision was felt downtown
    we kissed somewhere up there
    in love among the clouds

    our love is like a film
    a dramatic comedy
    there's laughter, life and soul
    apart we are raggedy

    i'm the minstrel and the poet
    and troubled troubadour
    she is the muse and the magnet
    my mercy and matador

    a canyon and a mountain
    sometimes we don't make sense
    we are statues in a fountain
    is this a coincidence

    she is the colour i am the brush






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    LeslieMay commented on one

    10-09-2011

    Lovely!! It's as if you are painting a picture with your words. Great imagery!
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    Insideme commented on one

    01-28-2011

    The Minstrel,The Poet ,The Troubled Troubador....that is classic, love it.
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    Phission

    01/28/2011

    lol...thank you so much for taking the time ! it is always appreciated !

    tenderpoison commented on one

    01-02-2011

    Wow - that's all I can say right now. your delivery encapsulates the love, humor and understanding of human nature - I can see a glint of humor in your eye and a wry smile on your lips as you whipped this out. 10
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    Phission

    01/02/2011

    thank you, i really appreciate YOU taking the time to read me.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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