i lost her

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    i lost her

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    i have lost my love
    she is gone from my life
    taking with her so many parts and gifts
    that i thought were ours

    so much of what i held so dear
    was clearly never here for me alone without her
    she has gone away

    heartbreak has a sound
    but i only hear it at night
    beneath the moon and it's life
    within my breathe out of light
    dug in deep sleepless rites

    i miss her
    my hands and my lips kissed her
    i miss her pressed against me
    embraced in thank you's and helloes
    in love you's and who knows

    i am made of water it turns out
    and everything is wet
    my body cries, upset i sweat
    in this story of lost glory and adore you's.


    i miss you, annie.











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    cttgad commented on i lost her

    09-20-2012

    Love the sincerity and truth in this write. Sometimes people are afraid to tell others of the pieces of life they stole from our souls as they left.The peices they steal may not quickly heal but that because they're absorbing the nutrients they left behind that will mature into a deep appreciation of love. Great read.. Thanks for sharing it.
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    Crush

    09/21/2012

    thank you for your time. yeah, this was a dificult time and still is on most days :) but, ever forward.

    Crush

    09/21/2012

    oh, as not to confuse you with the comment...."Crush" is also "Phission". Phissiion is love poetry and the other....is something else.

    cttgad

    09/21/2012

    No confusion here. I read in a comment before that you were thinking of changing your name back to "crush". Part of letting go of what once I suppose. Funny how we have a tendency to label ourselves throughout life. One thing I've learned is once "the label" is there its hard to remove and always has a tendency to leave remnants behind.

    EyesOfRain commented on i lost her

    08-29-2012

    Call me stupid, but I just realized that you are Crush!!!! This piece is so amazing. I agree with CheronId, do not give up on Phission.
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    cheronld commented on i lost her

    06-20-2012

    I promise I'm not stalking you...lol....but I was just going through some poems with the tag of lost love.....and this was one of them....WOW...who knew.....I wouldn't stop using your alter ego at all....Love will find you another day....this was sad and had such longing....Love sometimes is what you have....when we but turn around.....She is there and I hope you find her....Cher
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    Phission

    06/21/2012

    Thank you, Cher. YOU can stalk me ANYTIME ! Thank you for your time. It's so great how I can go about my life while at the same time pouring out my anxiety and heartache anonymously. No one knows and I have a release. Wonderful. Thanks again for reading me.

    cheronld

    06/23/2012

    I wish I had thought of the whole....anonymous thing before I used my name....lol....it would have been better I think....but I do like the alter ego idea....thanks for the tip.....Cher

    MorsetBillie commented on i lost her

    06-20-2012

    this sounds so sad yet powerful. Good work hey, hop Annie can hear or see it wherever she is.
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    Crush

    06/20/2012

    thank you

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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