these days

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    III




    my ravishing girl with fists
    leather and lace twisted around
                       your wings and wrists
    a righteous fix of happy madness
    and woven ways
    with  kisses
    that claimed my thoughts for days

    my honourable and warmest host
    gallant hopes departed like ghosts
                       as i felt you leave

    but still you return
    and yet you remain
    this curious surprise.











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    cheronld commented on these days

    06-27-2012

    For once I'll keep it short...nicely done......Cher

    Phission

    07/22/2012

    Cher, I actually revamped and rewrote this poem. I like it so much better now that I have gotten rid of the heavy weeds. I hope you like this newer crisper version as much as you liked the original entitled "time".

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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