the gift
!when i think of her it's as if
i've received a gift
the excitement and the anticipation
of her parade
and the life she has made
come alive in me
i think of those days sunning by the river
and kisses so deep
she can see into my dreams
!
the gift
2 Comments
Tags: Love
when i think of her it's as if
i've received a gift
the excitement and the anticipation
of her parade
and the life she has made
come alive in me
i think of those days sunning by the river
and kisses so deep
she can see into my dreams
!
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Poem Comments
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LeslieMay commented on the gift
10-09-2011
- I love this. It's short, yet it says so much! I think 'trying your hand at love poetry' is working out well for you! :)
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10/09/2011
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gmcookie commented on the gift
04-30-2011
- Aha! A new poem! And, me thinks, that spring is on the air when the sap starts rising and a young man's fancy turns to love. Long live the days by the river and never relinquish those dreams, my friend! Your poem takes me back there, lo so many, many years ago...
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10/09/2011
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