this ( for annie )

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    this ( for annie )



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    heavy words thrown around a room
    and there is no better ricochet
    than "love"

    lights flash and feeling splash with true identity
    once futile dealings are now robust and plenty
    she is power and passion
    i am snatched to attention by her voice
    and massaged in the words from her world
    my heart aches it's throbbing beat
    and all songs are now complete
    stripped am i of flesh that i would give to her
    if she grew cold
    deprived am i of comforts
    if her life needed gold
    broken are my bones if she needed defending

    i love her






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    mony commented on this ( for annie )

    01-02-2011

    Beautiful poem.... it has so much texture and feeling.. I loved it..
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    Phission

    01/11/2011

    thank you so much for your time and attention ....i will return to read more of your work as well.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on this ( for annie )

    12-24-2010

    I like the way you think. The wording in this one is amazing. I had to read it over again and roll the words slowly along my tongue. Fave line ' My heart aches it's throbbing beat and all songs are now complete. Excellent write..........E
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    Phission

    12/30/2010

    thank you for you time and attention to my word.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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