"Winds Of Betrayal"

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    "Winds Of Betrayal"

    As the winds of betrayal blow gently through her mind,
    Leaving her cold and oh so blind

    As glistening tears flow from her eyes of blue,
    And her heart reaches out for that love anew

    As her arms stretch forth, seeking a moment of contentment,
    Finding only taunting memories of past resentments

    The pulsating echo, the resounding beat of a broken heart,
    Brings a death that will set them forever apart
    Judith A Birdsong

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    tierra7 commented on "Winds Of Betrayal"

    12-23-2009

    Lady Judy you write with so much grace...you seem to flow right along side of your writin'...ty for sharin' ..Namaste.. Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

    Dina commented on "Winds Of Betrayal"

    07-18-2009

    Although simple, we have here the spirit of a poet who has not learned how to be a poet, but was born a poet. The purity of spirit and the untouchable beauty of expression, tell everything about the poet herself

    ginga commented on "Winds Of Betrayal"

    07-15-2009

    You have a very tender way of emoting all feelings in a straight-forward no nonsense purity. I love this poem. You may enjoy "Bellvue Falls" & "Oh Cling to Me, " about loss that I have written. Ginga

    origionalmerlin commented on "Winds Of Betrayal"

    03-20-2009

    (smile)

    ndg commented on "Winds Of Betrayal"

    01-06-2009

    This is beautiful and touching

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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