RAIN

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    RAIN
    THE WETNESS OF YOUR LOVE, POURS HEAVILY ON MY SOUL
    SOAKING ME WITH YOUR RAPTURE, AS I DRIP WITH ECSTASY

    I AM DRENCHED WITH YOUR PASSION THAT SHOWERS FROM YOUR CLOUDS
    MOISTENING MY DESIRES, AS IT DRIZZLES ACROSS MY PLAIN

    LET ME FEEL YOUR THUNDER THAT RAGES THROUGH YOUR STORM
    DROWN ME WITH YOUR AFFECTION, AS IT WASHES MY TROUBLES AWAY.

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    stellar commented on RAIN

    11-13-2009

    Very powerful imageries...I like this one...When I am reading the poem I am really always particular with the imagery and flow..like it!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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