The Tears Of A Man

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    The Tears Of A Man
    LIKE A WATERFALL, IT DRENCHES HIS PLAIN
    EACH DROP A SYMBOL OF HIS DEVASTATING PAIN
    SHOWERED BY HURT, TORMENTED BY FEAR,
    HE STRUGGLES TO SEE THE LIGHT AS HE WIPES AWAY HIS TEARS


    LOYALTY, COMPASSION, HONOR AND RESPECT
    THE THINGS HE OFFERED TO SHIELD HIM FROM NEGLECT
    THE KEY TO HIS SOUL HE GAVE FROM THE START
    NOT KNOWING IN THE END THEY WOULD ABANDON HIS HEART

    A LIFETIME OF HAPPINESS, A WORLD HE WOULD CHERISH
    BUT WITHIN A BLINK OF AN EYE, HIS DREAMS WOULD SOON TO PERISH
    HIS EMOTIONS HE CANT HIDE, FOR THEY’RE IN PLAIN SITE
    BUT THE ANGER RAGES FROM WITHIN, AS IT BATTLES HIS PLIGHT

    LIKE THE SANDS OF TIME, HIS WORLD SLOWLY COMES TO AN END
    WOUNDS OF HIS HEART, WITH TIME THEY WILL MEND
    LIFELESS AND BROKENHEARTED, HIS SPIRIT SOON DIES
    THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS, WHEN A MAN CRIES.

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    stellar commented on The Tears Of A Man

    11-13-2009

    OH this is sad,,,This is always the world impose on to man...to be hard as a stone...maybe because of some biological bases...man are made stronger than woman...I like this...very catchy because of the rhymes...
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    Ocean4u commented on The Tears Of A Man

    10-14-2009

    Hi, I just read Tears of a Man it has depth, gut it's to the point.Also it gave me a lil somthin insight on a topic very few men comment about at all,This poem was crack'in :} sincerly Ocean,
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    inkmaster commented on The Tears Of A Man

    10-14-2009

    cool poem good reading well put together ,,,,,Inkmaster
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    Jai316 commented on The Tears Of A Man

    06-11-2009

    That was a very powerful and well written poem; I enjoyed it very much. It's not everyday a man bears his soul and emotions with tears from the heart due to pain, anguish and hurt. Jai~
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