THE BALANCE

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THE BALANCE


 

 

 

Gently, slowly
I moved close to her
leaning over
compelled by forces
never quite understood
but heartfelt
for her love
beckoned a reply
to which I responded
placing one kiss
to each eye
as they closed
sealing her fate
to be forever
lost up in love
for me
as I was for her.
"Remember this moment
should doubt
cloak itself
in an attempt
to steal away
with our love
this intoxicating nectar
from the gods." 

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IzzyGumbo commented on THE BALANCE

10-10-2009

really lovely my friend. Romantic, gentle, wonderful. :)

graceladymn commented on THE BALANCE

10-08-2009

A really nice piece of work, so smooth and tells of ensuring that love remains, both given and taken.

hoth2o

10/09/2009

Thank you for taking the time to read this. I try to offer something to take with you. lol

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

hoth2o’s Poems (39)

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IT BEGINS ANEW 2
GRANDMA PLEASE 2
PUPPET MASTERS 2
Winter 1
INTELLECTUAL FODDER 0
DOWNCHILD 1
THE FACE 2
SYNAPTIC OUTBREAK 1
Mother Natures Yoke 4
Hi Books! 0
Winter 0
Simple Gifts 0
NIGHT COURT 1
ONCE WE WERE A FAMILY 1
Stains 3
First Pleasures 1
There Were....... 0
Two Proud Ladies 2
THE BALANCE 2
I Don'T Wan'T To Fall Down Again 0
look at you 2
Penny a Pound 1
Self 1
A Word from Our Sponsor 0
Thorns Included 1
Scalded 1
Night thoughts 1
The Shrine 2
NO VACCINE 1
LOVE AND BEAUTY TRANSFORMED 1
SILENT TEARS 2
ISLAND OF THE NIGHT 2
PILOT WITHOUT A FACE 0
Cry out! Cry Out! 1
CIRCULAR MISDiRECTION 2
THE KELIDESCOPE 2
Gossip 3
EXIT WOUNDS 6