The Battle
At last we meet in battle. Both of us have trained for this day... and both of us are ready to die for what we believe. I have looked death straight in the eye,,, never flinching... never showning signs of weakness. I am ready! Are you? Today one of us must die, but it is not my day. It is sad that I know more ways to take a life... than to save one.The Battle
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Tags: Life
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am2anangel commented on The Battle
10-21-2009
- hope you dont mind constructive criticism; missed your a in the word straight. Also again; I realize your poetry style is short poems. I honestly think you would grow so much as a poet if you added more detail and expanded your ideas into longer poems. But; just a thought. I like what you do have and the messages. Well done.
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10/24/2009
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wagus commented on The Battle
10-21-2009
- Again as noted on another of yours 'why fear death" and are we realy taking a life if all that is taught is true or are we just helping birth..? Life is no meant to be saved just grow on...
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koolmom0 commented on The Battle
10-21-2009
- WOW! I cant imagine, but this is awesome it paints a very clear picture. Koolmom
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snowfire commented on The Battle
10-12-2009
- This is a deep poem. It makes one really think. Not sure what else to say other than it forces to make one think
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