The One I look up Too.

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    The One I look up Too.

    You came into my life at 13, scared unknowing of what you had in store and still you never weakend. You taught me how to stand on my own to feet, and how a real man should act in every sisuation even when his back was against the wall. I know i may not have always acted the way you thaught me to be and for that I know what i have to do now. I just want you to know that from here on out I will model my life after you and raise my daughter and tire to teach her everything that you taught me I hope that someday Im half the man that you showed me. I love you dad and I always will.

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    05-05-2009

    It's great that you have a father to look up to. A man need a father. This a good poem.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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